Wednesday, November 17, 2010
Sunday, October 10, 2010
Nizammudin To Keshavpuram
Chapter 5 Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Author: Jujuneechan
Disclaimer: They are not mine ....
Thanks to my proofreader who did it in record time as usual '
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Under a bunk bed
A secret hideout
A child safe
A crying child
-I hate I hate ...
The child is angry
They do not like adults
They understand nothing
They hate
He hates
The child is angry
The child cries. He cries because he can not do anything
A door that opens
Steps Light
A weight on a bed
A child hidden catches its breath
you count how long to stay there?
L’enfant se tait
L’enfant se fige, jouant le mort
A l’abri
A l’abri du poids au dessus. Du poids qui ne semble pas vouloir bouger
-Ce n’est pas comme ça que tu obtiendras ce que tu veux, tu sais ?
L’enfant tira la langue
Le poids n’en avait que faire
Le poids ne pouvait pas le voir
-You 're really a kid
He was angry
He has 8 years
It was no longer a kid
He shot the light weight of
-Kazuko-chan
A burst
"I'm not a girl!
A laugh
-Not sure. Even a girl spends so much time crying.
A child who exposes
"I forbid you to say that ... I ...
A child who Green is
-I ... I cry so much ... so ...
hiccup
Tears Of
cry which take
"It is wicked. ... I ... I hate you ... you ... like it co ... nasty ... nasty
the tears that are stronger
A sigh
A teenager who rises
A hug
- go, go I ... 'm sorry
A hug that comforts
Go, stop crying
The teenager began up to the child
A tender smile
-Sorry, I said that to get you out of your hole
the crying stopped
A pout
"It's not because you're big you can call me a kid. I'm not a kid
-You got 8 years Kazu. I have 13, you're a kid
-Hey, not even true and then and then yourself first
A laugh
arms crossed
A look bad
Poor head
-You 're a kid Kazuya
-IT IS NOT ...
you renounce. You spend your time crying when you got a problem
A serious tone
a scolding tone that is meant
Tears who start ; up
The child lowered his face
-You 're a kid. If you think that's how it works is that you're a kid
A child who can not do otherwise
A child who is ashamed
A lost child
Tears
Shoulders caught
A body shook
-Hold her head!
quizzically
An air still lost
-Hold her head. It's not what you want? Playing baseball is what you want?
-Or ... yes
Ben so hold her head. Defend yourself! You want to defend him and what you want Kazuya!
"But ...
-Come on! Crying will not make a difference
"But ... Aniki ...
A hand grabbed
A child from
A child who follows him to a teenager, back
From behind
& hellip ; ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ..
2:57 p.m.
Lounge
A young man who grows impatient
- You will not escape
Poor
head - I have already minimized. You can not always refuse to go there!
Mutism
The other locked himself in his silence
He stood there face down
Frowning
The hunched
Mufflers
The other was never silent
Never when it was released for medical
The other cried, cried. The other was never silent
No it was new
-Listen Koki
He took a chair
He sat opposite him
Peer to Peer
Always
-Three, three visits per year. Only three. You know it yet. You know that normally it once a month. You know that!
Silence
The other was walled up in his silence
He raised his voice
Just
-The driver will be there one minute to another. It will help me lead you to the ambulance. Koki you go, you go whether you like it or not
The other bit his lip
restraining herself from screaming
keep from crying
He did it wrong again
A sigh
"I promise you it will go quickly. I would make it beyond the usual blah
- ...
-Koki?
A call
A call sweetness
glances that cross-
Koki please?
Sweetness
Still
A face that is less severe
A silent acceptance
-Koki, I ...
A ringtone
A resignation
I-back
The other was upset
It will not be easy
Inert. Silent
He may leave to do so. Surely
A sigh
He descended the stairs
He walked quickly toward the entrance A door opened
Kamenashi-san-Bonjour-Hello
Taguchi-san
Taguchi-san
An ambulance
was often he who had
C & rsquo ; was a good guy
Not one word louder than the other
Never a cross word
Simple
-How are you?
-gonna, are you? Although well-
. Since the time we had not seen! And Koki, ca va?
-gonna. It is top-
Still not excited?
Yes
A laugh
"I can understand. The weather is bad, I do not want to leave either
Yes
was a good guy
"He is ready? We can go there or you need more time?
"It is good. Come, enter
He climbed the stairs, followed by The young driver
He hoped the others were co-
Koki. It Taguchi-san picked us
The other did not look up
Still Silent
-Koki Hello! It's been long time since we had not seen
Silence
A scolding tone
-Koki you could answer
He saw the driver give him a nod
He sighed
-We will go
-Oh! I almost forgot
He saw him squatting in front of the chair
He looked to
He saw something out of his pocket
Asomething shiny he placed on the knees his brother-
As I knew I had to pick you up, I asked my daughter to do this. It is the month of March but hey that's my Christmas gift late
A chuckle
A tinkling bell
A
A small golden bell, attached to a red thong
A golden butterfly, next to the bell
A small gift
A little surprise
-It pleases you?
A ringing
A smile
Finally
sea ... "Yes thank you
"But nothing, I know your passion for butterflies
He straightened
He smiled
He had to answer a ringing
was a really good guy
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3:42 p.m. A vehicle
hospital
A rear door opened
Platform
A chair placed over a chair occupied
-You ready?
A body stiffened
A body invaded by fear
-gonna go Koki. You'll be safe
A button actuated
A platform lifts, lifting a chair with her
A chair occupied
He saw the metal platform at the rear of the vehicle
He saw her rise up, raising his brother at the same time
He saw him shrivel
The other was afraid The other trembled
He knew
The platform was not solely responsible
Not
The other was afraid of being outside
The other no longer used being outside
Looking darkening
Guilt
-Kamenashi-san?
The back door was closed
His brother was installed
eyes fixed on him
The worried look
-Everything Well?
Yes, yes. Sorry, I can
He shook his head
It should not indulge
Not today, especially not
was already quite difficult for the other
He should not indulge
A street
A vehicle parked outside a hospital house adjacent to a neighborhood grocery store
A young man climbing into the vehicle
Another young man who spends
glances that intersect
glances that recognize
Downtime
A timeout
glances still
A truth discovered
A vehicle that starts disappearing
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7:52 p.m. A hospital corridor
Waiting
Hours
he was there in that hospital
Hours to run from room to room
Review Review
consultation consultation
From record review
hours waiting
And this last consultation was endless
The consultation of the doctor in charge of his brother was the
only when he was not present
This one and that with the psychiatrist
He accompanied him everywhere
Unless there
A laugh
It was not con
He knew why
A bitter laugh
Yeah he knew
The abuse
They wanted to be on the other was not mistreated
They wanted to be on the other was happy
Pampered
Beloved
He fell on his chair
He covered his eyes with his arm
He clenched his teeth
Amer
-Kamenashi-san?
A burst
He sat up, watching her vis-à-vis
Tired
-Taguchi-san?
The doctor called me Kitagawa. The consultation is nearing completion
Finally
Finally, they would fill back
The other must be tired
-It will be happy to find his house
A smile
Another, worn
-Yes ... You
A door that opens
A white blouse
An old man
Finally
-Oh! Taguchi perfect! Will you take Koki-kun, I have to speak with his brother
Yes, yes
He rose while the other went out his brother the doctor's office
He advanced
-Ca va?
The other looked tired
-I ... I want to re ren ... ... ... TRERE
-Taguchi-san will lead you to the car. I will be with you 5 minutes
He said that looking at the old doctor
He saw him frowning, dissatisfied
He had only to
-D has ... agreement
-There will Koki
He saw them pacing the hallway
The back of the driver him hiding his brother
-Kazuya- kun, it will not take 5 minutes
He turned to him
-It will take 5 minutes, Dr.
Relentless
-Kazuya-kun
"I know what you say and it's not!
His condition does not improve- not. I told him again prescribed anti-inflammatories for his back pain but it does not change the problem
"I would not let him in center. It's out of question
-Listen. I know it's hard but it's not abandonment. There, it will be framed. Professionals will look after him. You can see it when you want. This is ...
"It is not. He does not want. I do not want. I'm maybe not a professional but I am his family. I know him. And then, and then he will not
-It has not all there, you know. That's why you are her guardian. It's up to you to decide for him
Anything
Anger
-Well, I decide not!
"It is not reasonable. He needs supervision and care professionals. He needs the relief. He needs to be accompanied ...
TIL-I would work more. He does not like Matsumoto-san. That's why he makes no effort. I'll get another physio. Besides, I found another
-Kazuya It is not enough, you know. His health ... your brother ... his body he does
The 5-minutes are up
Leak
"He waits. Goodbye Dr.
Steps squeezed detour a corridor
An output
Leak
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9:13 p.m. A well-known area
A home
Two men in front of a car
A final exchange
-Thanks for helping me to ride Taguchi-san
"But that's normal. And I enjoy spending time with him
A smile
Two
Yes. He loves you so much
-I only speak a lot nevertheless. I bavasse I bavasse. I must annoy
-No. He often speaks of you when you are away. He told me your stories
"It is true
Yes. Excuse him, he can not keep a secret
A laugh
Me either. My wife me complains constantly. I can not hold my tongue
"I had noticed
A laugh a tired smile
" Well, I'll let you
Yes. Go
well-Thank you. Good evening
A final waved
A vehicle that moves
was really a good person
He had a questionable humor
But it was someone nice nice
Yes
A sad face
Like him besides Him
A sad smile
He had seen
He had seen
What he may well have thought?
Does he have mercy on him too?
Are things would be different now?
Maybe he would never return
Maybe he wants him
The other had been friendly
The other was open and it ...
I'll get another physio. Besides, I found another
He said that within the scope of nervousness
He rushed
The Another had just discovered
To discover this ...
He sighed
This was not the time
It was late
The other was hungry
He turned
He walked to the door he stopped
The mailbox
Something beyond the opening
There was nothing yet before he had checked
before leaving for the hospital
newsprint
was an article from a newspaper article
Last night in the park Kingyo in the district of Nishi, the Police, alerted by a cry, surprised a young couple giving a few unseemly activities. They were both taken to the police station nearest you.
A big "You think I should go apologize to them?" was written next section
He smiled
He laughed
He laughed so relieved relieved
He returned, ranking piece of paper in his pocket
He climbed the stairs
A ringing
He smiled
It was there, watching the bell
Smiling
-Koki. We eat?
Looking tired A smile
Tired, also
"I ... can I go to ... ... c ... neck ... I sleep ...
-Oh no! I have a surprise and it will not be good tomorrow ...
-A surprise?
fatigue faded somewhat
Joy replaced it a bit
He stood behind him, pushing the wheelchair to the kitchen
Yes. A surprise
He stood before the table
An open fridge
A packet out
-I went this morning to buy
A Surprise ;
covered cake
Then another
-A strawberry and a chocolate fondant
"They ... they are ... big gr ...
His face Tra silent informed
He was tired
But he looked happy
Ben I say like that, we would be hungry. It pleases you? Or
-Kaz ... yes ... yes ... Kazu-ni
A smile
Two
A young man who is working
Another who looks
-During that they eat, you will tell me the nonsense of Taguchi-san
Yes
And then people will watch TV both in the room
Yes
-Oh! First, I must give you your meds
Yes
-morrow, I would go to the pharmacy. I order, we will be able to renew
Yes
-Slim where they are?!
A young man who stirs
A young man who seeks
Another who looks
Tenderness
Sadness
"He'll have to talk too. You do not move enough is not good for your body. We will ... oh I know where they are! I return
A hasty exit
be a single
A sad look
A ringing
... ... ... ... & hellip ; ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ..
A suivre….
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Hot Wheels Gas Powered Go Kart
Naked Naked jailer jailer
Chapter 4
Author: Jujuneechan
Disclaimer: Yeah well, you know what! They are not mine ....
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3:05 p.m.
An open storefront
a deserted grocery
A young man adjusting the spokes
Still
organize, store, move
He did it
For an hour he tried to deal
For an hour he tried to ; empty head
But nothing to do
He kept thinking about
He kept stressing
And if the other wanted him
And if the other did not return
He had not opened the eve
They had agreed to see him and he had not come
What the other was thinking of him?
And if the other was no longer coming
He shook his head
But what it took?
What he had to shake like that?
They had not promised anything
And then he knew only a few weeks
He barely knew
Yeah, they had nothing
He had more important things to worry
He had to manage his business
And there was his brother
Yes, there were concerns more important than
... That
-I bothering you?
A burst
A box falls to the ground
Precipitation
"I'm sorry. I did not want to scare you
The other picked up the box
He chuckled
-Decidedly, I spend my time to surprise you. Sorry
-No ... I ... uh ... that's me ... I ...
But it is not true
is not true
What he took to stutter like that?
It was not a kid
Speak damn
Say something
-I ... I'm sorry. Yesterday I ...
"You do not know what I saw yesterday
" I am ...
"I went through the park
-Yesterday, I ... eh? What?!
-Park. You know the one with the fish sculpture at the entrance
Yes the park. There's only one anyway
-Oh wait
Laughter
The other had turned the conversation
Still
The other did not want him?
Yes-so I walked last night and now you do not know what I saw
He continued his leisurely storage
A smile
-That is what you saw?
-A couple who get laid
He laughed
He did it with him, laugh
-No but I swear I knew where to put myself
-T ' had to join them
He looked surprised
A burst
-T 'es con
-I know
They smiled
He continued to bustle, moving, placing boxes
The other gave him a hand, telling her story
-N prevents, she uttered these cries the girl. At first I thought someone was attacking
Ah yeah
-Yeah ... So ...
He looked wide-eyed
is not true
-T have not done that?!
-If you mean by that, come up with a piece of wood gathered in the park in the middle of their antics and screaming like a pig "release it immediately "... if ... if
Oh damn
He laughed
was too
Damn
-Ha ha ha ... it's not possible ... Ha ha ha ... c & rsquo ; is not true
-Do not laugh. You can not imagine, I felt too stupid
-Ha ha ha .. I guess if if fu fu fu ..
-So, when I realized that ... well ... you see I dropped the stick and I started crying ...
-Bouahahah ...
It was folded in half, literally folded in half
It cry almost
But it was not possible
The other was not possible
-Ahhh ... sorry
He eventually calmed down, gently
He wiped the few tears that had escaped from his eyes
He straightened
He breathed
Thanks him
Thanks to this man he had known for several weeks
Thanks to this man he barely knew
- is not nice to me
The other smiled
The other looked at him this look garbled
Captivating
- Do not worry, I would have done the same
Captivated
This look
That look still
The look that made him want
Wantwhether
Knowing that
Know why
That look that attracted
-I gotta run. I just passed to say hello. But I can board this evening?
Yes tonight
He would ask
He wanted to know
Yes tonight
Yes returns ...
A smile
Two
Bien Chief
A laugh
From Air
Finally
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7:42 p.m.
An apartment
A routine
He was ready to go
his brother re lay
He was tired
He saw
But he was fine tonight, nothing to do with the day
Yes he was alright It
had smiled all evening
Speaking of the last cartoon he had seen
Eating chocolate mousse
Smiling
He was fine
He said good night and he left
-Koki ... I
an accident that claimed the lives of 5 persons. The bus driver has ...
Not
A remote caught
A television off
Kazu-no- ;?
-Do not watch it
Why?
Why was the other watch the news?
The other should not understand anyway
Yes the other should understand anything
Absolutely nothing
Since the accident, he could not stand these stories pile
It no longer supported the announcement of the annual number of road deaths
He could not stand cars
He did not
He did everything on foot
He hardly left the neighborhood anyway
The hospital provided them with a suitable vehicle driver when they had to move his brother
was a sort of ambulance
the Ca reassured
We could not have an accident in an ambulance
No we could not ...
Kazu-no-re ... hands
He turned to him
This look
-Put
Firmness
His voice was barely trembled
His face had been seriously
His gaze had not wavered
The weather for tomorrow. The time will be cloudy but ...
This look
He had not seen for a long
His eyes
His strength
-Koki ?
The other gave him a smile
-Bi ... kiss
The glow was gone
;
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1:21
A grocery
Two men sitting on the floor
Two men sitting against a counter
One a cigarette between his lips
The other a candy in her mouth
-You 're sure it bothers you that I smoke?
The other finished eating her sweet gelatinous
Non-jte said
-Well ... if you say
-Yeah, I say
lips stretching around a cigarette
lips stretching revealing a sweet tooth colored
Complicity
-You 've never smoked you?
-No. I do not like being addicted to something
survey eyebrow
-Since you spend here, there isn'ta single day when I see you trying to eat a crap full of sugar. And you say not wanting to be addicted?!
-Hey! This is not crap
-Oh and what is it?
"It is the food of the people
A laugh
-No matter what
-Yeah well I'm addicted to sugar
-You will end up obese
Shrug
-J & rsquo ; did not intend to deprive me and then we all die of something. You, you're not going to stop your lollipop cancer even if you know it can make you die, do you?
-No chance
Ben is the same for me. Anyway, I do not get fat. My mother and sister accuse me constantly. They are always there with ...
Finally
Finally the noise
He could no longer calm
He was tired of the silence
From silence of these walls
the silence of its walls
the silence of his life
Finally a loophole
Finally
And blah blah blah. I swear. They are very good and yet they complain
He watched reel with his hand
He was always so
If living
He stood so many question
He wanted to know
He wanted to know
He wanted to know who offered him his friendship
Whoever offered him more than it
one who allowed him to breathe
Finally
-Brief. I'm bored ...
-Can I ask you a question?
-Uh ... yes yes of course
You're not obliged to answer. I mean, I want to be indiscreet. After all, you never ask me anything and ...
-Ask your question
- ...
C'mon-I say. I do not answer if I do not want
-Ok ... so ... if I understand you are the buyer of the former bakery?
-Not quite
-Not quite?
"It is my sister who bought it a few months ago. It is acupuncturist for some years now. She wanted to start his own firm and she invited me to be his partner.
-acupuncture?
Me? No no I hate needles. Besides, it's been years that lead me to get tired at the meeting. It can always wait
A laugh
Two
"No I am physiotherapist but my side of the cabinet has just been completed. Of So I still have some free time
A glance
Eyes surprised
-physio-Masseur sithérapeute? But how old are you?
-27 years, almost 28
-27!
Yes 27. You thought I was how old?
Ben-I know not like me, just about
-How old are you you?
-23 years
-23 years!
-Yeah, I know. I'm older
"No no it's not so much that you do older. Is ... well ...
The other observa
"It is rather your body
He looked surprised
He looked surprised
-My body? What is wrong with my body?
"He is tired
Surprise
Still
He crushed the end of his cigarette in his pocket ashtray
Tired
The other had seen
He lit another cigarette
He did not think
-Do not get me wrong. It's my job after all
-Yeah
- ...
-So you're Physiotherapy since when?
Mmm-barely two years I'd say. I was a nurse's aide before
Help carer
The other arrested
He could understand
Yeah it could
He drew on his cigarette, expelling smoke
"It is not easy as job
-No job is easy, no
He watched from the corner of the eye
The other was still on the air face
This air unfathomable
"I have loved every minute you know
Why have you arrested then?
The other ate another candy
He smoked his cigarette
-Sorry, I'm curious too. By ...
-T excuse not
The other he smiled
He turned watching an imaginary point in front of him
Captivating
- It was not enough. I wanted to do more. I wanted to do more for them
- ...
"I've always wanted to work in the medical community. My father, he wanted me to be a doctor. The prestige you understand.
His face darkens
His lips froze
The smile was gone
-prestige, I do not care. What I wanted ... actually I do not know really what I wanted. Help others say it is con eh?
He denied head
Not
What there was con in there?
What he had to con wanting to help others?
What he had con in there if it was sincere?
-I returned to training in the middle of my 18 years. My father did not like, "You're not going to spend your life cleaning the shit of others"
He felt his throat
Clean shit
Is it right?
-As if you could reduce it to clean the shit. At the nursing home where I worked, I was not satisfied about that. We looked after them, they listened, they spoke. Most of the time they had us. They have given me as much as I gave them these little old, as
The smile reappeared
The strength of his gaze had not wavered
And then even if c'è ; silent as that. Even if they were to spend his life cleaning other shit, what was it? I do not see how it is shameful to do that! We are talking about human beings, beings human mess!
Clean Air
Still
-Sorry
- ...
-I get angry
He gave an embarrassed smile
He grabbed another candy
He probably tried to calm
"That's nothing. I understand
He stubbed out his cigarette completed
It stung a candy
The other said nothing, watching him, smiling
It's been a long time he had not eaten
He felt the taste of sugar
Then gelatin stick to his teeth
He sighed
Yeah it was long
-Brief. I studied physical therapy to 22 years and after 3 years, I found myself physio. Today, I open my own firm
physio-Why?
"I do not really know. It came to me like that. I guess when you spend your time take care of the body that suffer, well did you want to do more. I wanted to do more. I wanted learn to relieve pain.
Pain Relief
The other had just said that
Without fuss
Unpretentious
Just simply
-Jin you ... oh sorry I meant ...
-Why do you apologize?
That look still
Captivated
you find it so bad to call someone by their first name? You think he really is plenty to apologize?
This clear vision
Always when he looked
-Say like that, I guess not
-We speaks endlessly polite and convenience, yet ...
The look is darker
A smile that freezes
- Yet I see no respect in this world ...
Surprisingly
These words
- It owes nothing to people Kazuya. Nothing, except the respect
A man staring off
A man so close
So far, however
-Damn!
Panic
He rose abruptly
3:04
My god 3:04
He had forgotten
He had forgotten
A baby monitor
Hum
A heartbeat that calms
Relief
He had not noticed the time passing
He had left the baby behind the counter phone
Damn
What he played
"I'll help you close
The other was already advancing toward the storefront
No question
The other asked him no questions
Neither his behavior
Ni on the baby monitor
Nothing
While it ...
-What do I do?
- ...
"You want me to retract the panels in pubs?
Uh-yeah ... thank you for the rest ... I'll take care
-As you wish
He complied with a smile
Without ask
Without asking anything of him
Nothing
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... & hellip ; ... ... ... ... ... ..
3:37
A room plunged into darkness
silence occasionally broken by a snore
He breathed, relieved
He was angry
He had forgotten for a moment
He was angry
The other was lying on the back
Sleeping deeply
Sleeping peacefully, lying on his back as usual
On the back
back on this that it saw almost no
Hidden cons mattress
Hidden cons back of a chair
Hidden, away from his gaze
This back he had always observed
That back it could never achieve
This force he had admired
This force had disappeared
That night he dreamed
That night, for the first time in years, he remembered
kazuya-Live your life ... live your life but remember that you're not alone in this world
A man looks set off
A man so close
So far, however
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A follow
I apologize for the delay. I am a bit overwhelmed right now
Thanks for your encouragement anyway
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